tears like rain



sense the rain of tears
that burst upon the scene
 these trembles of souls
all in an instant of misery
do you feel the weight
the need of hearts

to close the circle
can we sustain those souls

and can we make them whole again
in a time when needed most

it is all we can do

all we can be

shed a tear

share the blood
do you feel the pain
I know you

I know you do

I know I hope

you

will

come together

and

find

a

way

Author's Notes/Comments: 

another place

the same complicite

crime

 

we are all

somehow

accomplices

for not doing more

to stop the the gun

"" VIOLENCE""

 

peace

HOPEFULLY SOMEDAY

Dylan

ps

sadly,

i may stop writing poetry

my words seem to be meaningless

 

 

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my hiatus

seems ended

peace

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

Sassylass's picture

Your words, Dylan

Have much meaning!

this is very heartfelt.

i share in this sentiment,this feeling.

keep writing,please,

hugs,

Koko~


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

Morningglory's picture

Your words are certainly not

Your words are certainly not meaningless. Please don't stop.


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poeticdillon's picture

Don't quit

No words are ever meaningless if spoken with pride, keep writing.

allets's picture

Words Have Purpose

but sometimes I feel that way. Words vs guns - still words may change the mind of killers one at a time. I worked a few years at Job Corps talking endlessly that guns end in a wasted youth in prison or the hell of guilt. If one heard my words, learned to value life, then it was worth the move to Florida. Words from the pen need a hiatus, but after the living and working, loving and doing good, come back and chronicle your journey. Or just to hang out. You will always be a wordsmith. Love and Prayers ~Stella~ xoxoxo