At The Westward Border Of Eden

Adam, the fallen namer, one day heard---

out ofan early morning dream---a word

to label that dream's dark imagination

of an existence wholly without God;

and its condition, more than merely odd.

Such life would be quite bleak, a living death

fearful that each and every inhalation

(short, long, or hard) might be the final breath.

Small joys would have leeched out long before dawn

(not glorious, but dim with slanted light).

And with no peace of mind to still the night,

the very stars would seem to mock and say,

"God is further than we are far away."

And, naked when the time was right to play

with Eve's delightful curves while making love

would just become a brief postponement of

a grim reality they could not shake

off:  life's bleak propsect---that all hope had gone,

and every act was just a preparation

for endless hell and absolute damnation.

Hvaing dreamed that, Adam was glad to wake,

in faith's comfort:  he and Eve were within

God's love, which would allow no separation

even despite their adolescent sin.

Life without God---that dread dream had assured

Adam---could be called, utterly, absurd.


Starward

 

[jlc]

Author's Notes/Comments: 

The placement of Adam on the westward border of Eden is suggested by the ancient, and noncanonical, Book Of Adam And Eve, translated with extensive commentary by the Reverend S. C. Malan, D.D., and published in 1882.  Saint Paul's Epistle to the Romans, chapter 8, inspired some of the poem's latter lines.

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