A cool and gentle breeze floats by
And gently chills the skin
Dimly seen through hardened eyes
Tried but not forgotten sin.
No longer does it make him cry
Nor blood rush to his face
No longer do his muscles tense
Only just a weary trace of sadness.
Like this poem very much,
Like this poem very much, it is so sorrowful for lost love. The reader can perceive the regret throughout the poem you have created too. Almost mournful.
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