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Shaded Eyes
The poison that's flowed through my veins
Has already run its course!
Stained and sick the heart and mind
Pain - now visions constant source.
The toxin spread into my eyes
Now shades the souls I see...
Drudging through thier sin-stained lives
The broken rules of centuries.
Nothing goes without a price
But still they take and don't think twice!
Till debt collector takes his toll
And debt consumes the wretched soul.
This may give a different perspective Dear Mr Daniel48
http://www.postpoems.org/authors/bishu/poem/981149
©bishu
Your poetry has always
Your poetry has always intrigued me so! I'd really love to hear the backstory behind the inspiration for poem you gave me the link to! Thanks a million for dripping by and sorry for the slow response I Havnt been on in a while... I'm not as frequent as I once was
Compelling word usage and
Compelling word usage and visionary content in this poem. Just loved the mesaage of over pollution and we all paying the price, our environment is for looking after. Enjoyable read and very well written.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem enough to comment! That's so fantastic :)
I love this darker vision, it
I love this darker vision, it has real substance. And flows so well. :-) x
Thanks sweet water! One of my
Thanks sweet water! One of my regular viewers... I'm so grateful for the time you take to comment and encourage. :D Its very motivating!!! :)