Death By You

I don't think death would be so bad...

To up and leave this world at last.

To dwell up with the stars above

To watch and to protect my love

 

To comfort her

To watch her grow

Her happiness  I'd want to know!

 

A kind

A gentle - Loving man

At last through life holding her hand!

 

You see my dear...

I cannot die

By blade, by gun

By loss of life

 

What kills me now is loseing you...

To tears

To hurt

To grieving gloom

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nightlight1220's picture

Oh wow. 'Undying' love?

Oh wow. 'Undying' love? Fortunately love lasts forever, even if some people have no strength to admit it. It is the changes it goes through that makes it so difficult.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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I really like the idea for

I really like the idea for the title!!! and i think it would undoubtly fit very well!!! :D But mmmmm i want to emphasise that this persons unhappiness is the only thing that would really kill me. hence, "Death by you" ... altho... i'm not sure that fits too well. I'd like to emphasise the point more through the title without almost making it sound like blame hahaha :P