TOTAL INSANITY

Total insanity is what I feel

so much emotion but all unclear,



Fighting for nothing is what I am

my whole sence of being is in a jam.



Confusion ponders my little mind

constant thoughts and therioes never subside,



Searching for answers but all seems shit

whats round the corner another glitch?



I want to be everything the world wants me to be

but ahving problems planting the seed.

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its a good and inspiring poem of your's..like its idea and the way you did perfectly..seems that you are a good poetess.. and hope you write more to let the readers read.. and hope you will go through my poems too and like it... if yes then the comments will be respected from your side being a poetry friend... basically I am known as a peace wisher poet with 6 books published and let me shair one of my own famous say with you regarding peace... ((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...Afzal Shauq ))) and sure the is based on love and love is being omited by us the , the persons of literary world.... best of luck friend and waiting for hearing from you...