-whenever you are absent
i'm
without myself
insanity
whenever
you are near,
i arrive
ecstasy
-heart and mind...
expanding
and still...
a joy...
a smile..
you complete me
i remember You...
we are
in each other.
This poem, makes me remember, a once forgotten feeling now brought to the surface, because I am experiencing such undiluted kind of affection again. This was weaved beautifully that it could be interpreted in both earthly, and spiritual sense. If this was meant in the literal way, your inspiration is one lucky soulmate... I noticed that both You and I are capitalized at the second last line... Does this mean that you and your soulmate feel the same kind of chemistry?
A deep poetry that leaves so much to the imagination with but a few lines that says everything... This one inspires me even more to plunge deeper into love, in both physical and spiritual essence...
Awesome!
Shye
“ Let the beauty of what you love be what you do."
~ Rumi
fancy
this is cool...i like...
Interesting...
This poem, makes me remember, a once forgotten feeling now brought to the surface, because I am experiencing such undiluted kind of affection again. This was weaved beautifully that it could be interpreted in both earthly, and spiritual sense. If this was meant in the literal way, your inspiration is one lucky soulmate... I noticed that both You and I are capitalized at the second last line... Does this mean that you and your soulmate feel the same kind of chemistry?
A deep poetry that leaves so much to the imagination with but a few lines that says everything... This one inspires me even more to plunge deeper into love, in both physical and spiritual essence...
Awesome!
Shye
“ Let the beauty of what you love be what you do."
~ Rumi
thank-you.,
thank-you.,