I See Wishes

I See a Wish

Springtime comes,

With bountiful fields,

With flowering meadows,

With joyful animals.


Springtime comes,

With suffacating thorns,

With ferocious storms,

With surrounding weeds.


No! Do not think that way!

The thorns protect,

The storms nournish,

And I do not see weeds,

I see wishes.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This one's ok for an inpromptu poem I guess... :-)

lifzmuzic's picture

i just loved it

 really well written i loved it alot very moving lol

Kthonia's picture


Lovely poem, Lizzie!!

1MusicNotes's picture


Thanks Jenny!