poetiser

the way back

 

Feather drifts in the paddock mist,
catches on a fence where the crow keeps watch,
slips past thistle and shadow‑fox,
rests by the lantern in the council’s glow —
and somewhere beyond the hill,
a glint waits for the hand that knows the way back.




life-arc

 

 

 

Life‑Arc Diptych

I. Townhouse Days — Looking Back

 

In the upper case,
a volume the colour of
late‑harvest light,
its spine breathing
salt and iron.

 

I keep it ajar —
not for dust,
but so the mapped water
can run beside
my own small channel,
each bend marked
in a hand I almost know.

 

Through the plaster,
a swell of brass‑warm air —
someone’s breath
caught in a long note,
turning the parlour
to water.

 

I did not rise,
only let the sound
find its own shelf
between the maps,
where it could lean
against a memory
I had not yet
admitted was mine.

 

Between the first assent
and the last,
a pressed leaf holds
streets I never walked;
in the hollow
where a page was long gone,
I’ve set a three‑part hinge:
motion, tether,
threshold.

 

It waits there,
not as ornament,
but as one more
voice in the palimpsest —
leaning into
the window I still
leave unlatched.

 

 

 

 

Hinge — Platform Light

 

Between the last stair
and the first step down,
I carry both airs —
brick‑warm and hay‑sweet —
in the same breath.

 

The train waits,
engine ticking like a clock
that belongs to neither house,
and I stand in its glow,
already partway gone,
already halfway home.

 

 

 

 

 

II. Homestead Nights — Looking Forward


The road out of the city
was a long exhale —
brick giving way to hedgerow,
hedgerow to open field.

 

By dusk, the air
tasted of cut grass and diesel,
and the porch light
was the only star
that didn’t blink.

 

In the kitchen,
boots left by the door
like commas in a sentence
I’d been writing all term.

 

Nights here were wide —
crickets stitching the dark,
the wind combing the wheat,
the barn’s slow breath
settling into the rafters.

 

Come morning,
the rooster’s call
would fold me back
into the farm’s grammar,
but for now

I lay between two lives —
one lit by streetlamps,
one by the moon on tin —
and felt the tracks
still pulsing
under my skin.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

.

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Reading Note — The Loop

These two pieces are not fixed in sequence.
Begin in the city and ride out to the farm,
or start under the wide‑skied dark and follow the tracks into bricklight.
The hinge is your turning point — a platform where both airs meet.
Read them forward, read them in reverse,
and you’ll find the same current running through:
home is not one place, but the motion between.

 

 

 

.

 

 

View redbrick's Full Portfolio

looking back

Folder: 
tidying poem

 

 

Looking Back

 

In the upper case,
a volume the colour of
late‑harvest light,
its spine breathing
salt and iron.

 

I keep it ajar —
not for dust,
but so the mapped water
can run beside
my own small channel,
each bend marked
in a hand I almost know.

 

Through the plaster,
a swell of brass‑warm air —
someone’s breath
caught in a long note,
turning the parlour
to water.

 

I did not rise,
only let the sound
find its own shelf
between the maps,
where it could lean
against a memory
I had not yet
admitted was mine.

 

Between the first assent
and the last,
a pressed leaf holds
streets I never walked;
in the hollow
where a page was long gone,
I’ve set a three‑part hinge:
motion, tether,
threshold.

 

It waits there,
not as ornament,
but as one more
voice in the palimpsest —
leaning into
the window I still
leave unlatched.

 

 

 

 

 

 

.

 

View redbrick's Full Portfolio

platform light

Folder: 
bridging poems

 

 

 

Platform Light

 

Between the last stair
and the first step down,
I carry both airs —
brick‑warm and hay‑sweet —
in the same breath.

 

 

 

 

The train waits,
engine ticking like a clock
that belongs to neither house,
and I stand in its glow,
already partway gone,
already halfway home.






.


View redbrick's Full Portfolio

homestead nights

Folder: 
dusted vault

 

 

 

Homestead Nights

(Sequel to Townhouse Days)


The road out of the city
was a long exhale —
brick giving way to hedgerow,
hedgerow to open field.

 

By dusk, the air
tasted of cut grass and diesel,
and the porch light
was the only star
that didn’t blink.

 

In the kitchen,
boots left by the door
like commas in a sentence
I’d been writing all term.

 

Nights here were wide —
crickets stitching the dark,
the wind combing the wheat,
the barn’s slow breath
settling into the rafters.  

 

Come morning,

the rooster’s call
would fold me back
into the farm’s grammar,
but for now


I lay between two lives —
one lit by streetlamps,
one by the moon on tin —
and felt the tracks
still pulsing
under my skin.





.



View redbrick's Full Portfolio

stencil on the pavement nights

Folder: 
commentary

 

"Stencil on the Pavement Nights"

 

Under the sodium lamps,

the street writes itself

in chalk and meltwater,

each line gone

before it’s read twice.

 

I keep moving —

not for warmth,

but so the glass façades

don’t catch me

standing still.

 

From an upper floor,

a spill of light

and the clink of thin‑stemmed glass

fall into the gutter’s

slow current.

 

I don’t look up long —

just enough to see

a hand lift,

a mouth shape a toast

I’ll never hear.

 

Between the hiss of tyres

and the snap of wind

around the corner,

I pocket a scrap

of torn poster:

colour, slogan,

half a face.

 

It waits there,

not as keepsake,

but as one more

mark in the stencil —

pressed into the wet concrete

before the night

sets hard.

 

 

 

 

 

.

 

two rivers speak

Folder: 
commentary

 

"Two Rivers Speak"

 

Beneath the ice,

I am still moving.

You can’t see it from the bank,

but the push is there —

steady as breath,

older than frost.

 

Across the sea,

a card you keep in a drawer

still hums when you touch it —

quayside stone,

a smear of light on water,

the ghost‑ink of a name

you once answered to.

 

We are not the same river,

but we share the pull:

one in your marrow now,

one in your hand like a dare.

 

Let the postcard be a charm,

but not a tether.

Let the ice be a mirror,

but not a wall.

 

Your soul is its own current.

Your voice is the thaw.

 
 
 
 
 
 
.
 
View redbrick's Full Portfolio

Sirens between the walls

Folder: 
commentary

 

Palimpsest Between Walls

In the upper case,
a volume the colour of
late‑harvest light,
its spine breathing
salt and iron.

 

I keep it ajar —
not for dust,
but so the mapped water
can run beside
my own small channel,
each bend marked
in a hand I almost know.

 

Through the plaster,
a swell of brass‑warm air —
someone’s breath
caught in a long note,
turning the room
I sat in to water.

 

I did not rise,
only let the sound
find its own shelf
between the maps,
where it could lean
against a memory
I had not yet
admitted was mine.

 

Between the first assent
and the last,
a pressed leaf holds
streets I never walked;
in the hollow
where a page was long gone,
I’ve set a three‑part hinge:
motion, tether,
threshold.

 

It waits there,
not as trophy,
but as one more
voice in the palimpsest —
leaning into
the window I still
leave unlatched.

 

 

 

 

 

.

 

 

View redbrick's Full Portfolio

until the duvet is folded

Folder: 
commentary

 

 

Until the Duvet is Folded

( after CG Thomas' "As I Lay Dying" )


I rest in the breath of wild thyme,
late warmth carrying a brio of wallabies
slipping between trunk and shadow.
                    A duvet settles over me,
           its seams brushed with wattle dust,
the slow dissolve of aniseed toffee on my tongue,
linen on the line lifting in the afternoon drift.

 

                              I linger, hearing bees
trace loose spirals through tea‑tree and grevillea,
the ring of my father’s axe on the woodblock,
my mother’s voice spilling from the kitchen —
                flathead spitting in the pan,
condensed milk thickening in its tin.
The ground beneath me eases,
soft as sand after rain.

 

I watch the sky unroll its pale cloth,
clouds loosening toward the far hills.
I remember a cake bright with sherbet lemons,
tin kangaroos wound and hopping,
friends whose names still bloom in my mouth.
Back then, no thought of what might follow —
         only the clear window of youth,
       edges now dimmed.

 

I dream the meadow into its first dawn:
river tumbling over stone,
wallabies hidden in their burrows,
duvet now folded and set aside.
             In that last quiet,
     I choose love over ambition.
                 The air keeps it for me.

 

 

 

 

.

 

 

View redbrick's Full Portfolio