homestead nights

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Homestead Nights

(Sequel to Townhouse Days)


The road out of the city
was a long exhale —
brick giving way to hedgerow,
hedgerow to open field.

 

By dusk, the air
tasted of cut grass and diesel,
and the porch light
was the only star
that didn’t blink.

 

In the kitchen,
boots left by the door
like commas in a sentence
I’d been writing all term.

 

Nights here were wide —
crickets stitching the dark,
the wind combing the wheat,
the barn’s slow breath
settling into the rafters.  

 

Come morning,

the rooster’s call
would fold me back
into the farm’s grammar,
but for now


I lay between two lives —
one lit by streetlamps,
one by the moon on tin —
and felt the tracks
still pulsing
under my skin.





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S74rw4rd-13d's picture

Given the circumstances and

Given the circumstances and vicinity of my adolesence, this poem touches me more than just the literary way; and more profoundly than most poems can.


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]

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That is most interesting and

That is most interesting and very significant to have chanced upon a personal connection. The most important poems to me have such a quality whether making inroads to self or projecting outward to dreams and aspirations. Thank you, dear Starward-LedSmile


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I doubt if I can keep up

I doubt if I can keep up commenting, but you will always hold my applause!


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Your applause rides with me;

Your applause rides with me; tucked in the carriage light, steady between city and field -yet your voice is paramountly welcome each step along the way.


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