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Weak sonnet but one which was cathartic to write at teh time.  One of my earlier works.

OK, the form is irregular, the meter fractured, but other than that, it's ALMOST a sonnet.

This was an early work of mine as I was developing and seeking to understand some of the forms.

It is a personal statement that I've chosen not to try and clean up.  

Somethings shouldn't be pretty, when they are honest.

A sonnet, but wuth some meter flaws I know need to be worked out.  I attempted to cross lines and stanzas on this in a more modernistic form.

I kinda set this as an exercise for myself.  It’s been a little while since I’ve written anything. It kinda works, but took a time to hone into shape this far. Exercise done, methinks enough.

I know it sucks . . . I wrote it for a course at school, so I tried to have fun with it.