Pixilated Lust

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Pixilated Lust

"Procreation" or "knocking boots"
Be you a believer or godless
Their meanings are now loose
It's been reduced to a business:

Swapping lust for loot
A body for a bonus
Making love out of lust
And a camera's poised to shoot

Post the scene online
Our primal thirsts emerge
Instinctual as a canine
Can't control the urge

Oh humanity!
Gawking mindlessly!
Flocking endlessly!
Stop this orgy.

I wrote this in like an hour. I've never really written before. Just had the urge. So let me know what you think?

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I think...

... it's very good, and hard to believe you don't usually write. I suggest write more.