mirror myself

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it sat within the mirror
lost in celebration,
of what beauty it possessed.
oh,its sapphire eyes
glowing with marvel it saw..
saw a face of such radient bliss

alluring,appealing
so abnormally astounding--
a face..
my face,
it grew angst as i looked away,
away from the mirror she loves..

absorbed she is within the glass..
my lady me.
how she sucks into its world
of still waters in the dark,
and broken mirrors many more,
which pierces its soul.
gives her the lie,
oh ,how loves she the lie -

lies of disguise
fills her thirst,
her fatal beauty captured.
i walk away from the mirror
while she is peacefully,
laughing on the other side..

WhatIAmOrWillBe's picture
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Something about mirrors

Nice write. The other persons separated by a thin sheet of glass seem so similar but worlds different at the same time dont they? I like this poem.

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wow, captures me straight

wow, captures me straight away. Nice imagery! I like the syle you use too. I am very new to posting but hope to read more!!