I'm new a tthis...

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Jpoems's picture
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Hey whats'up.
I was looking for somewhere to share poems/short storys/lyrics, for gaining feedback or any other purpose. I'm new at this, I'd love to get feedback.
Anyway,
here's my first "poem", remember ,I'm new at this ;)

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A bright darkness and a dim light,
realisation sets all unimportant things aside.
My heart bearing the weight of the night,
a fading light, almost out of sight.
Finding the remnants of your power and might,
the soul preparing for the final fight.

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Holly--Priscilla18's picture
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Hum....

~I like your poem But I don't really understand what it means.

~ Holly--Prisiclla18~
~ Reply back and tell me what your poem means. Okay :) ~ ?

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Hey, I am so sorry to respond

Hey,

I am so sorry to respond this late...

I haven't been on this site in ages.... in fact I kinda forgot about it. Now busy with college and all, but I have written some things though.
Would love to speak to you about the poem, but it might turn into a long story/ discussion so maybe it would be easier to talk trough like aol or msn.

I really hope you read this, and I sincerely apologize for this super late reply.