MT's Poem Lines

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Dear Reader, You might have a different list of favorite lines

in this poem of MT:


Learning patterns in the men 

 As if they were Braille in motion '

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'A kimono puddle at uncertain feet.'

 delightful creativity'


'When I first saw you

 My collapse was an edgy house of ice 

 cards '

 

' I have covered them (the men) in stains of ink'

 

 delightful creativity in the poem

https://www.postpoems.org/authors/cascade/poem/1102072#comment-529657