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Can I get feed back please.

Can I get feed back please.

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This is as long i want it to

This is as long i want it to be. Any critiquing?

 

Does the point get across?

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I need help getting started

Vernon seasons

The laughs the cries the cheers

Recognising their worthethrough the years

like rising bleacher tiers