An ironic mega-pizza! Over: An ironic mega-pizza! Over the years it would appear that each generation and cohort would capture and be captured by certain words and phrases that stick and become their descriptors. It's an amazing phenomenon.
The Fuzzy novels of H. Piper: The Fuzzy novels of H. Piper Beam were among favourirte sci-fi of our growing years. And Nicholas Fisk among more recent ones, by recent meaning early 80s. THe double entendre is that Mars is the god of war hence "martian gods," hence harping at both meanings.
I agree completely with: I agree completely with Pungus' comment. The poem is very somber, but after seeming earthbound (for lack of a better term), it springs---no!, unleashes---that final line on the unsuspecting reader. I enjoy subtle science fiction poems---and this is one of the subtlest I have read in a long, long time.
A word picture of a: A word picture of a relationship that brings to itself all and everything, causing all exterior influences to still themselves and create a cosmos between love's two parties as they become one more with the dynamic union of Creator and Created.
Thank you kind sir. And such: Thank you kind sir. And such attacks, whichever direction that they may be made are what this expression is about. We all have personal preferences but that should never be the reason for demeaning or ostracising what is not to one's personal taste. What may not be our proverbial cup of tea is definitely rightfully someone else's.
It is my hope that validation: It is my hope that validation be given at every quarter, dear poet. A long standing criteria in the recognition of poetry is the elevation of language and from whatever end of tthe socioeconomic strata and their corresponding use of language, as they express that elevation of heart and soul through articulation then poetry results. Thanks most kindly.
Sometimes the tendrils of: Sometimes the tendrils of smoke undulate and float as oriental dragons slithering in the air. At ohter times the smoke is somewhat a signification that dragons are close by. But what dragons, indeed!