deep with in 2011
i was crying so deep in tears
no one could see my pain or fears
burying my burdens was better than talking
so depressed was i from deep with in
deep with in deep with in
no way out no need to shout
deep with in deep with in
my burdens were mine no one would find
sinking fast from the weight of sorrow
i couldnt continue to put on or borrow
taking those pills i thought i was clear
but lost sight of those whom i find dear
under i was no need to bost
till i was reminded what mattered most
the love of my children came shining in
sank down inside deep with in!
Zoeycup16.
Author's Notes/Comments:
This particular Poem was my very first one, I wrote it while i was in the Psych ward at St. Mary's hospital, i went there after i tried to kill myself and it means a lot to me because it is exsactialy how i felt right up till i desided to end it all i didnt think there was no way out, but i know now there is always a way out one just has to want it badly enough, this Poem i dedicate to all who are in a volitile relationship and dont think there is any way out, there is always a way out, i got out of a 24 year very abusive Marriage and if i can get out after all those years then so can you! And never forget to always Stay Strong!!!!!!
Deep With-In
I say again, There's a reason for you doing what you do.
Hang in there, keep writing. A very Insperational poem/message.
*MilMan*
Deep with-in
thank you so much MilMan i didnt think they were very good but i still love to write them, this one is special to me because its my first one thank you for putting a smile on my face this morning i needed that
Zoeycup16