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Black Hole
No where to go
No where to run
You look around
You're not the only one
Who got caught in this trap
Got caught in this game
Now no one cares
They forgot your name
Welcome to the Black Hole
Enjoy your stay
There's no charge needed
Except your soul to pay
Welcome to the Black Hole
Enjoy your ride
No place for you to run
No where for you to hide
Boy does this sound familiar. Thank you for putting it into words in such a lovely and flowetic way.
Hello. Powerful images rise out of the spaces between the words in this. It has a quality of emptiness that seems to emanate rather than radiate.
That is makes you feel woefully lost, is a given.
I would think it would do werll, adapted to a rapacious backbeat, that seems to pound like a heart in desperation and a mind adrift in the lost.
This is actually a very compelling write, when the imapct of its mesage is absorbed. ~Tim
You rock IBURSweetEmoGirl
Good poem! But life itself is a black hole, isn't it, with problems that have no solutions.