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Remember
You don't remember when I held your hand at the heart doctor, when you gaze into his eyes.
You forget I'd stay up all night helping with your homework, as his lips touch your cheek.
I'd wake up early for you every day, but you forget this too as he squeezes your tits.
He works his fingers into you, you scream "fuck me Chris", and your ring still sits in my closet.
As I'm remembering the lonely plane rides home, you begin sucking his dick.
You said "I'll love you forever", it's forgotten as his tongue strokes your clit.
I meant every word in that song, but it doesn't play in your head anymore.
When he's done slamming you, he finishes on your face, stops the camera, and he leaves.
One day you'll remember too... You meant more to me.
wow let him fuck her and you
wow
let him fuck her and you forget her my dear
Much Love
Ashley
:)
good idea
we can be each other's
we can be each other's buddies on this, coach each other, snedpm's following up on how we are both doing at this, seems how it appears I need to do the same...what doya thinlk? lol
Much Love
Ashley
Sounds good
:)
Frickenbrilliant! Reads
Frickenbrilliant!
Reads beautifully!
Awesome job! :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks!
:)
WOW! that is a slammer if ever I read one!!!
Unbelieveable! and well written a little foggy on the second stanza but irrelevant this is one stick it to em reality check hard slap into context!!! great write! BRAVO!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks!
I was a little unsure about this one, and was even contemplating deleting it. I'm glad you like it. Any suggestions for the second stanza?
ok since you asked... why stop there..;)
first line change "as" to "when"
2nd line you forget "that" i
as "Im remebering" lonely plane rides your...
you said ill love you forever... fogotten as his...
just little things :) feel free to ignore :) cheers ss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks!
Is that better?