Unconscious Mind

I know that it will be a while
Before I can guarantee
That the rain in my eye's from happiness
And happy is what I'll be

 

But I can't live where they live
I'm afraid my hands are tied
'Cause somewhere in my unconscious mind
All these worries hide

 

I know that I will take some time
To get back on my feet
Sometimes it's like I'm caving in
But happy is what I'll be

 

But I can't live where they live
I'm afraid my hands are tied
'Cause somewhere in my unconscious mind
All my thoughts subside

 

I know you see I'm far from fine
But you just have to see
That if it were just as simple as
Happy... is what'd I'd be

 

But I can't live where they live
I'm afraid my hands are tied
'Cause somewhere in my unconscious mind
I'm still preoccupied

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MyinsecureSelf's picture

nice poem! The emotion you

nice poem! The emotion you put into it is apparent in every stanza

nathan32's picture

nice

when i first started writing i wrote a lot of poems like this, it was healing to make something dark or painful beautiful. good job.

chasemcgill's picture

Beautiful Poem! I can feel

Beautiful Poem! I can feel the emotion radiating off it. Well worth the read!


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