Bleed
Stab me slow, watch me bleed,,
is it my pain,that you need.
you stabbed me in the back,
then you walked away,
and here i stand,still bleeding today.
I don't know why you hurt me so,
i don't know why you turned so cold,
you closed all doors,you return my mail,
do you enjoy putting me through hell.
Do you really believe those lies?
you didn't even ask me ,i was surprised
do you really know me ? i don't think you do,
if you did! you know i would never be untrue...
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Ron,
Remember my friend that i told you about, rob, well when i read this, this is how i felt, the thoughts the feelings, everything, this poem was speaking so clearly and loud to me, i loved how you wrote this, im glad to say though im moving on with my live, i know that i love him, and i know the good times we shared, and thats what i carry with me, love this
love
crystal
wow great poem.this is very deep and i can relate to it.but keep writting so i can keep reading these awesome poems.