Here i sit
trying to birth a poem
This one hurt`s
i don`t know where i`ts going.
I`ve wrote everything under the sun
i don`t know,i think i will just run.
I guess it`s just not my time
i can`t seem to make anything rhyme.
guess i`m just wasting time
but i know that it will come.
sooner or later.
so until it does
i bid you later...
I can relate to this ,for me it's finding the right metaphor but I don't quit till the piece is completed no matter how late,how tired because I'm stubborn to get it done.I like this piece!
I can relate to this for the most part. Although, I don't sit down and rhyme very often. I normally am free style. It's nice to see you got over your writer's block to write this. I'm not over mine, but when I am I'll let you know.
Look deep into your heart and soul..and you will find so much to write about...dont worry... i believe in you...Never stop writting...i helps get it all out..and dont run from it, it will make things worse..trust me i know..
Love
Crystal