I walk these sand dunes
hoping not to lose my way.
This war is so bad,i fear
i wont see another day.
But if i should die before
i see you again,i pledge
my love until the end.
And tell my children i love
them so,and tell them
i didnt want to go.
And tell them i will always
love them till the end of time.
But if i make it through this
war,i promice to leave you nomore.
But today i am a soldier trying
to find my way,please pray for
me everyday.
Some times i can feel you by my side
yesterday i even cried.
But thats not the way a soldier should
act so pray everyday that i will make it back..
very emotional. i really like this one. my prayers are with the soldiers
I have a poem similar to this one but this is from the veiw of a teenager praying for them. I like yours better though.