Remember When

A Poem by wordman

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Do you remember me baby!

do I ever cross your mind

does your mind ever wander back

to that place in time

 

They say a hot romance

burns out fast

ahh but what a love while it lasts

a couple years pass not too long

but a lifetime of memories to look back on

 

I dream of you from time to time

and the sweet memories of you

that echo in my mind

 

I know I could have made it real

true love for you is what I could feel

I just couldn't connect the dots

 

Too many wrongs

too many rights

too many feelings for me to fight

you bought linen with my last name

and when we made love

it drove me insane

 

So please forgive me

if you will

but I just couldn't make marriage

part of the deal

 

But you will always have a place

pressed in the memories of my mind

as I dream of you

from time to time...

 
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patriciajj's picture

Such an approachable, honest

Such an approachable, honest and stirring retrospect of a love that, in spite of all the human complications love brings, remains a meaningful part of you. Like so many of your works, this would make a fantastic song. It has all the elements of moving and relatable lyrics. 

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thank you pat for the great

thank you pat for the great review,and yes i just saw it today


ron parrish

SSmoothie's picture

A favorite theme of mine! You

A favorite theme of mine! You have rendered it well loved it! Thankss Blessingss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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thank you for the visit

thank you for the visit


ron parrish

bishu's picture

Well put

But you will always have a place

pressed in the memories of my mind


©bishu 

 

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thank you for the visit my

thank you for the visit my friend


ron parrish