Right now I wish that you were sitting here with me
Just to have you near is more than enough for me
And if you could only see the love I hold inside
You would feel the loves in your past are only lies
But even if you were holding me right now
Would that make it all better
Would it make the pain I feel go away
I don't know
I don't have the answer
Hey Jonathan. I got ur poems off of the member directory. I saw that you had put a pic up and I clicked ur name hehe. I read this poem and I love it. It's got depth and soul in it. Maybe you could critique a few of mine? Check em out. Keep writing. I love your work.
b sure to check our my bio, poems, etc.
hopefully ttyl, ~m
btw, nice pice ;)