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When the flock flies, does it not flutter my heart?

When it swoops, does not my heart feel its loops?

Have your collective minds formed a net, to capture me?

I'll let you, let me join your spirit group.

 

 

 

 

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Ruth Lovejoy's picture

I love this piece and your style in writing it. Some would not understand it I do. The metaphorical imagery is outstanding if you read carefully and realize the connection between man an nature and vice verse..

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If I didn't thank you before

If I didn't thank you before I'm really sorry. I think I had my settings wrong and wasn't being notified of comments. Very belated thanks!

Animal Poems's picture

the verb wheeling.. since I have read this..
has stuck in my head for years