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VIBRATIONAL JOURNEY
A written word,
Voices heard,
Magnetic sounds abound the earth.
No word sparred,
As thoughts are shared,
Vibrations interwoven bared.
Naked souls,
Their hearts are told,
Across the miles in Rapture, fold.
Words,
now spoken...
Voices,
broken...
Throats grow tight, for Gods' invoked them.
you seem a good poetess indeed....well done friend..this is really a good poem.. impressive and heart catchy too..you did in a good way and impressive..hope you also go through my poems... to know if my poems shake your heart or not???... I am basically known as peace wisher poet with six books published...I really wish to see the world in peace.. and we can a great role being poets...let me share with you one of my famous say .. ((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )))
Valerie, This one just flows right along...I read it out loud a few times. You can feel the passion and yearning. I really enjoyed reading this one and will be back to read it aagain!
Kris
Great meter. The flow of this poem is wonderful. I like it and I really like the images of the long distance romance. Kris
This was very moving, and I could relate heavily to your feelings...it's another wonderful piece of art, with credible depth and flow.... Long distance relationships are indeed very difficult, and oft very lonely and painful... I wrote a piece a while back about this same thing, called "Only Words"...if you get a chance, please check it out and see what you think of how I expressed this same basic idea.... Great writing here!!!!!!
Very nice. Lovely intertwining of love & modern technology. Good piece. Amy
Gentle is the night♥
Very nice. Lovely intertwining of love & modern technology. Good piece. Amy
Gentle is the night♥
Very nice. Lovely intertwining of love & modern technology. Good piece. Amy
Gentle is the night♥