Cold Dawn

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The skies are beaming changing hues,
     as daybreak triumphs over seas.
I savor watching the deeper blues,
      surrender free to morning peace.

 

A gentle breeze caress my eyes,
     then frozen tears begin to thaw.
 I smile as gladness start to rise,
     from the numb you've teased to withdraw.

 

Yesterday I heard dull laughters,
     from the hollow cheers inside my heart.
Today, colors, music, and tears,
     give life to joys that your beats shared.

 

New pigments suffuse my plain dawn,
      where gold alone tint my sunrise.
I welcome the cold I have not known,
      because I once felt heat from ice.

 

 

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crimsonangel24's picture

Again Wow!

I can see in the few poems that I have read, that you are a much better poet than me. This one just proves it.

But please, keep writing. I actually love to read your "attempts at poetry".


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