Alone in enmity,
Fading capriciously,
Drowning in a sea
Of my insecurities.
I sit and stare
At my life’s despair,
And wonder where
It all went wrong.
Forced to suffer through
The pain and suffering to
Be led hypnotically
By one who noticed me
Should I wait
And hold back from Cait
Or should I liberate
This thing that seems so strong
Questioning my desire
I maintain it holds much fiercer fire
Than all the love I find in her
Confusions lay
My time will decay
Her love will not stay
The eyes slip away
But what do they find
Does he match me
See what I see
How can that be
Most men are blind
Who says I’m not
I lie a lot
Leave me to rot
And fade to my mind
Beautifull!!!
I know I have told you before and I will tell you again, YOU are a WONDERFUL WRITER!!! please, never stop...
I love to learn from people like you.
This poem is so well done...I really like it..smiling..I think its probably normal to have an instant thought in regard to the first few lines and then struggle with expressing the true meaning of it..altho I did not realize this until u commented on the difficulty to finish...you are very talented