The Reason Why

The reason why

I dream of you

So I'll remember you

When sunrise glows



The reason why

The sand is white

SO I can follow you

Where ever you go



The reason why

You said goodbye

Cuz your time has come

For me..is to wait for mine

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Robert Whelan's picture

hi Vilma,

I think your poem might be better read if you attach each line with the following line ratter that short stanzas.

ie you write
the reason why
I dream of you
So i'll remenber you
When sunlight glows

I recommend
The Reason why I dream of you
Is so that I will Remember you
Whenever the Sunlight Glows

heatherburns35's picture

hi V, very heart touching...you are growing as a writer...very beautiful...good job...h
true love never dies...