The reason why I dream of you So I'll remember you When sunrise glows The reason why The sand is white SO I can follow you Where ever you go The reason why You said goodbye Cuz your time has come For me..is to wait for mine
hi Vilma,
I think your poem might be better read if you attach each line with the following line ratter that short stanzas.
ie you write the reason why I dream of you So i'll remenber you When sunlight glows
I recommend The Reason why I dream of you Is so that I will Remember you Whenever the Sunlight Glows
hi V, very heart touching...you are growing as a writer...very beautiful...good job...h true love never dies...
hi Vilma,
I think your poem might be better read if you attach each line with the following line ratter that short stanzas.
ie you write
the reason why
I dream of you
So i'll remenber you
When sunlight glows
I recommend
The Reason why I dream of you
Is so that I will Remember you
Whenever the Sunlight Glows
hi V, very heart touching...you are growing as a writer...very beautiful...good job...h
true love never dies...