is it okay?

may i please make one request

you see i am feeling blue

and it's not fair to my reader's

and friends, cuz i don't have

a poem or verse to construe



this request is simple and short

i'm sure you won't mind it at all

it won't take your breath away

or will you shell out a lot of dough



i like the way you look

i like the way you talk

i like the way you smile

and i like the way you walk

so is it ok?, i need to be inspired by you

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Afzal Shauq's picture

hmmm so sweet and loving poem... specially this stanza is very great...

i like the way you look
i like the way you talk
i like the way you smile
and i like the way you walk
so is it ok?, i need to be inspired by you