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WHEN YOU MAKE LOVE TO ME
Just a flickering glance between us
Ignites my inner fire,
The tongues of flame dart inward
To the core of my desire.
Starbursts cloud my vision
Like meteors in flight,
My senses start spinning
Down the tunnels of delight.
No world exists but our own
And you are the only one I see,
For we are at Heaven's doorstep
When you make love to me.
Delightful, and what a magnificent use of the ballad form! Bravo!
J-Called
I like it. Intense, focused, and sincere. Good rhythm and choice-use of words, too.
Ken
My Secret River