YO!
THIS CAT
WAS SO SMOOVE
HE STUDIED ME GOOD
BECAME A STUDENT OF
MY SCHOOL
HE GOT 2 KNOW ME
LIKE THE BACK OF HIS HAND
IN A CROWDED ROOM
HE'D KNOW WHERE I'D STAND
SO HE GOT ME TALKIN'
HE GOT 2 LISTEN
VOLUNTEERED NO INFO
SHOULDA KNOWN SOMETHIN' WAS MISSIN'
AND ME, U KNOW
I TOLD IT ALL
SHOWED IT ALL
GAVE IT ALL
AGAIN
ALL I GAVE
ALL I SHOWED
ALL I TOLD
ALL IN THE NAME
OF LOVIN' AGAIN
IT FELT SO GOOD
I WAS REALLY FEELIN' IT
YO!
THAT CAT WAS 2 SMOOVE
AND NOW
THIS FEELIN'
AIN'T SHIT
that is a lovely poem i live it. I is so real the way you came up with the words and the whole msg in it. Please keep it up. U can check ou mine to and tell me wat you think of them.