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A GLASS OF CRYSTAL CLEAR ICE WATER

Salmon patties makes U beg

collard greens, baked macaroni and

cheese

sweet potatoes, chicken gizzards,

conk fritters

black-eyed peas, butter beans

dirty rice, Texas Pete, Red Hot

Savory

(all)

Delicious

(that)

Succulent

(U)

Morsels

(R not getting)

Til' U come home

and oh yes!

Suck the barbecue

(Soul Juices)

from your thirsty fingertips!

COME HOME

Author's Notes/Comments: 

POSTED 9/27/02
THIS IS A LITTLE DISH FOR ALL THE BROTHAS WHO HAVE LEFT HOME.

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©2 May 2003 - 2:46am — vettie
21 August 2004 - 3:25am — poetvg
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awsome poem

29 August 2003 - 2:17pm — Shaketa Copelin (not verified)
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Feelin' this! This was tight! And I liked the fact that it was written for brothas!

19 September 2003 - 6:40pm — Ernest Bevans (not verified)
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U R maken me hungry --
but then again
you are skilled at stirring desire.
Good Write - Keep the faith.