My pretend friend

Why I started?..It was so I could numb the pain,
Everything after that just felt the same,
Almost no emotion but a shit load of shame,
The thing I love the most is the one to blame,
she picked me up and through me right into her sick game,
Now I need her so I can maintain,
Shes in my head fucking with my brain,
Making me think shit that I cant even explain,
Im loosing myself im using gods name in vein,
Stepping away from god and helplessly stepping into the devils domain,
Sip by sip im beginning to become less sane,
This is all my choice and I cant complain,
While I sit here and watch my life slip slowly down the drain,
Im sorry to everyone to what I became.

-Miss. Miller

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Enjoy this is about me and alcohol I dont talk about it that much so please give me some constrictive feedback!!

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Fitzgerald's picture

Very good write

Very good write

v2ourstyle's picture

Why thank you

Why thank you


-Miss. Miller

Beavis's picture

Interesting write!

I look forward to reading more!

v2ourstyle's picture

Thank you I have been wanting

Thank you I have been wanting to write about this for a long time.


-Miss. Miller

Merman's picture

Digging, Dug, DONE!

Very rythmic, and great word play. Dar shit too, deff a cool write

xMattx's picture

I like this

but that's because all of my stuff is dark and gloomy as fuck! Cheer up, it's not too late to change.

v2ourstyle's picture

Im not sad all the time I

Im not sad all the time I write poems about sad stuff so im not sad all the time if that makes sense. Lol


-Miss. Miller

RichardAlpert's picture

Makes sense. I am the same

Makes sense. I am the same way

SSmoothie's picture

Same here! But it was awesome

Same here! But it was awesome very stirring and intelligent write! :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

SSmoothie's picture

Well, Miss Miller this is so

Well, Miss Miller this is so scarily good it f'en ROCKS!!! wonderful to meet you cant wait to read more!!! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Thanx

Thanx


-Miss. Miller