Though the desert was so dark
The light was growing dim
Then my God sent a candle
To shine the way to Him.
The cliff was getting closer
There was danger in my path
The evil was growing strong
Peace was eaten by my wrath.
His word I stopped reading
Stopped praying for His will
Thank you now my Jesus
I am high up on a hill.
You did your special wonders
The ones we sometimes miss
But sometimes we just sit there
Amazed at the Holy Kiss.
Thankyou now my father
For these words you give
Help me get back up Lord
For you I want to live.
I love the words to this...they touch me
I would like to see you work on the rhythm on this some it would be much better.
for example:
Desert so dark
light growing dim
My God sent a candle
shine way to Him.
see what I mean? sounds more powerful and poetic dont ya think? this is just my opinion...
I need to write a poem for my Lord soon...I think that may just be my next project
clay