Candle



Though the desert was so dark

The light was growing dim



Then my God sent a candle

To shine the way to Him.



The cliff was getting closer

There was danger in my path



The evil was growing strong

Peace was eaten by my wrath.



His word I stopped reading

Stopped praying for His will



Thank you now my Jesus

I am high up on  a hill.



You did your special wonders

The ones we sometimes miss



But sometimes we just sit there

Amazed at the Holy Kiss.



Thankyou now my father

For these words you give



Help me get back up Lord

For you I want to live.




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Clay Archer's picture

I love the words to this...they touch me

I would like to see you work on the rhythm on this some it would be much better.

for example:

Desert so dark
light growing dim

My God sent a candle
shine way to Him.

see what I mean? sounds more powerful and poetic dont ya think? this is just my opinion...

I need to write a poem for my Lord soon...I think that may just be my next project

clay