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One moment please, must

have a moment to embrace

the essence of soul

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©14 November 2002 - 4:57am — ultimprv
14 February 2004 - 2:14am — Aclin Sevourity (not verified)
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very nice... i am a fan of this style of haiku... this piece is very beautiful and very meaningful...

18 May 2003 - 11:22pm — ~Angie E~ (not verified)
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Hey John,

This one is great.. short, but very concise.. I like it.. One of those that leaves you still struggling to figure out.. Keep it up. *J*

15 November 2002 - 8:55pm — raila
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This is a beautiful piece, my man! Wonderful!

RaiLa

15 November 2002 - 12:09am — Netta Jack (not verified)
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Such deep messages in such few words. Master at work.