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Into Me
I was with you last night.
Did you feel me?
You were into me
but only for a lil while
then you made me want
for you, I can't get you off my mind.
Sorry you chose them over me.
I was with you last night.
Did you feel me?
You were into me
but only for a lil while
then you made me want
for you, I can't get you off my mind.
Sorry you chose them over me.
nice little piece.
nice little piece. free-spirited_wolf has already said what i want to say, so no point in repeatin...
best wishes, keep writin :)
CONCISE, COGENT AND EXPRESSES YOUR FEELINGS APTLY
Nicely written. It is concise, cogent and to the point. You have talent. The poem depicts a loss in love. Keep writing. You will blossom into a very nice poet/poetess. I feel you are a poetess. Do not give up.
Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.
Pen name:Emmenay.
Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7
Initials: M.N. Ahmed.