Burning

Burning embers glowing red

watch the smoke rush to my head

as it travels to my mind

through the channels watch it wind



cold wind blowing fast my way

like the night becomes the day

ever present wheel of time

making all of you now mine



sometimes feeling others not

sometimes ice cold others hot

through the channels watch me go

take the high road take the low



won't you please me

make me smile

I'm here watching all this while

through the love game that we play

makes me feel good

feel this way


Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this during a sunrise at the Mahwah natural reservoir in North Jersey.circa 1975.

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Eddie Gain's picture

hearlfelt and beautiful without reaching any cliches

brilliant

poetvg's picture

BEAUTIFULL WORK
ON THIS I LOVE IT

Dustin Lambert's picture

thats pretty cool