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2001 From afar...You looked so graceful
Your shining brilliance brightened my darkness
Without touching, I could feel your purity
Each breath from your lips was a blessing...
Yet...With each closer step was a change
Your light seemed to fade a bit
Your purity seemed tainted
Blessings were turned into curses...
What happened to my angel
Was I always this blind
Could looks have deceived me
Where did you go...
I never got to touch your skin
You disappeared from my sight
I thought I loved you...but...
I don't understand what happened
From afar...You looked like perfection
A dream that I could reach toward
But as I looked at you deeper
Your beauty dissipated...
very well put...id truly have to agree with you on this, and i like your poetry, has alot of intelligence
Dee,
This poem really spoke to me. I really did like this one.
It hurts so very much when you find out that somebody you loved for the last four years of your life lied to you the entire time. Never trust anybody...being alone is the only way to save yourself from the pain of loss. Don't let yourself get close to others, cause it'll only end in heartache...i promise you that