It's the despair of despairs
Something that impairs
A carefree feeling flares
Exclaiming "Who cares!"
All hopes are like whirlpools
To the dismay of our cools
Sinking unrestrainedly rules
Becoming much like stools!
Flushed and gobbled up
Crippled, unable to stand up
These waters are just one stop
Not everyone makes it atop!
the flow to this is amazing the way the words slide from my tounge as i read this ...beautiful displayed emotions