live a life

Live a life,
I am dead inside
but that’s my fault don’t you cry
don’t shed a tear for my worthless life
I am dead inside

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this is the first poem i have willingly wrote you can probly tell

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I like this. Hopefully it

I like this. Hopefully it isn't too literal though..

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it was when i wrote it but i

it was when i wrote it but i got over it it was a feeling and i wrote about it thanks for the comment

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comment and tell me if you

comment and tell me if you like it or not

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i liked it

I did really enjoy this, but you should make friends with puncutation :)


Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before. - Steven Wright

People like you are the reason people like me exsist. Out of a song of the same title by a band called 'Say Anything'

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haha i have never been good

haha i have never been good at the technical side of writing