You can't keep being like this
I know you're sad
and in a funk
and
I know it's hard for you
it's understandable
anyone would be upset
but we've only got so much time togehter
and if you ever want to get together again
this isn't how I want to remeber you
you seem a good poet and writer....you wrote a good poem with new theme and the way you did is intereting..hope you go through my poems and do comments to know...basically I am peace wisher poet with 6 books in hand and dream for peace and let me share my famous say with you regarding peace... ((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )))hope you be in touch