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Love We all have flaws,
This may be true,
But I see none,
When I look at you.
Everything you do,
Is perfect in my eyes,
Every word you speak makes me smile,
Even when I know they're lies.
You're amazing,
And beautiful too,
I wish I could gather,
The right words to say to you.
If you ask why,
I guess its because,
I love you,
And I won't stop until my heart dies.
:) the beginning reminds me
:) the beginning reminds me of those roses are red violets are blue poems, and it made tiny butterflies dance ion my tummy thinking of young love, man young love rocks! :) I think it is awesome that you feel this way about her, just tell her, she is lucky!
Much Love
Ashley
Thanks I put a lot of work
Thanks I put a lot of work into this particular piece
Did you tell her you like
Did you tell her you like her?
Much Love
Ashley
Of course
Of course
:) good what did she say?
:) good
what did she say?
Much Love
Ashley
sadly i dont remember to be
sadly i dont remember to be honest
So u asked me to read n
So u asked me to read n comment ur poems like a rly long time ago....i am finally getting to it. Sorry it took so long dear. This first one is super cute.
awwww:') this is precious!! i
awwww:') this is precious!! i really like it:) good job!!
The Princess in Waiting
Thanks I spent a lot of time
Thanks I spent a lot of time on it
Time & Quality
It is so evident that you took time, the story line is kept intact, the realism about love tucked in as the "lie", the steadfastness that makes a relationship work, the give/take, the belief that love lasts always - the rhymes are magical and adeptly applied - the song matches the feelings and the sentiment is equal to the art - lovely and well composed ~~~~Lady A (I do not usually like rhymes...because they miss...you do not miss.
I actually have a better
I actually have a better rhyming piece called " The Truth Of Lies"
Better Is Relative
Just re-read this poem and find it magical - slc