The Truth of Lies...

I hope that you finally realize
That there is only one thing I truly despise
Which is the leading cause of most of our cries
Which also sets me apart from other guys
Who only want what is in between your thighs
And to leave your heart feeling victimized
But it should be evident through all my tries
That my aim was to leave you neither shocked nor surprised
To find that your heart had been burglarized
For I entered your soul through the beauty in your eyes
Not knowing you lacked the ability to compromise
Or could it simply be that you are a master of disguise
Searching for a way to bring about my demise
Because in all of our discussions, I received no honest replies
Only to uncover the heartache that the truth denies
Even through the times you witnessed my nature rise
Now do you understand what this really implies
You touched me in my heart, where the greatest love lies
But hid your true self from me so nothing great could arise
When all you had to do was simply improvise
Giving in to the moment instead of what honesty defies
I chose the moment, you chose otherwise
Maybe we should come together in an attempt to revise
Our current situation so we can once again be on the rise
Because the thought of you is the only constant when I fantasize
And when you speak, don’t think that I don’t empathize
But in the game of my life, you were drafted to be the franchise
I wanted to be your big fish, but you made me one of the small fries
And through deception, you darkened my blue skies
I mean, what can you expect when the truth dies
But a condition of the heart that will never revitalize
Because nothing can sooth the pain created by lies

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darkpool's picture

Ingenious, i read right along

Ingenious, i read right along just admiring the rhyme.

ThatCaptainguy's picture

The rhyming took a while to

The rhyming took a while to write to make it all the way through the piece

SSmoothie's picture

I liked this such creative

I liked this such creative lines ESP. Big fish n fries very clever and yet emotive.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

ThatCaptainguy's picture

thanks it took a lot of time

thanks it took a lot of time to write this

Elfy's picture

ITs really good, it shows

ITs really good, it shows apart of you, that i can tell, you dont show very ofton. Its deep, emotional, and sweet yet so sad. By reading this poem alone, i can tell that your not like other guys, you are truely differant. :)
Dont change. Keep writing. :)


-Elfy*

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People have lost sight of how

People have lost sight of how important honesty is in relationships. It goes way beyond just avoiding lying.