Time Traveling...

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Time Travel is a subtle process
Making a way back from the past
Not yet realizing the past is the future
Time goes by, suddenly we are moving on
Looking back the whole way
Hoping we did the right thing
Revelation of the truth causes doubt
Pain is quick to set in
The pressure to make a choice suffocates
Should i do what is best for me
Or should i do what i knew all along
This is what i think of in Time Travel....

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last updated 25 November 2011 - 8:24am
©22 November 2011 - 12:06am — ThatCaptainguy

29 January 2013 - 12:12am — heatherburns35

time travel

this is an excellent piece of writing. Deep thinking for a young poet. Do not let people discourage you from thinking and writing. persue your dream. Move forward and never look back my young friend.

14 February 2013 - 6:09am — ThatCaptainguy

thanks, i really appreciate

thanks, i really appreciate the fact that you actually put time into writing your comment while others tend to go generic. I can tell that it is genuine.

29 November 2011 - 5:47am — Beavis