Sinking deeper
there's no escape
everything has gone awray.
My world is spinning
I'm falling
down the spiral of failure
I hate myself
I have no faith
Hope
Maybe
I might get through it all
There's a chance
there it goes
out on the street
nowhere to go
I have lost
all hope
I've been sucked in
I'm drowning in the pit
Quicksand
Ten
Feet
Thick
wow .... its a good and attractive poem... agree with your theme and the rich way done... hope you go through my poems too... I am basically poet with 6 books in hand and member of this site too.... your comments are welcomed.. hope you keep writing always in the same fantastic way.... pray for your long and healthy life good poetess friend.....