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Blank Cheque
Words and numbers make up my mind,
Names and places, dates and times,
A record of identity,
All the information contained in me,
Coded fear, cloaked to create,
A mechanically constructed human state,
As flimsy as a piece of paper,
Just one more cheque,
Then see you later!
i like this one me. It`s so true about the way things are going. Glad you liked one of mine too mate! they`re all songs really but i thought i`d stick em up on here too. You should check my band out www.myspace.com/ourfold, let me know what you think! cheers dude, keep scribbling!
i like this because it is so symbolic of how we interact with one another anymore. forget the corner store where the owner watched you grow up. it's quicker to throw numbers on a screen and never deal with customer service. you've brought this point out so clearly. good writing.
MR
yes whether checks or any other paper form we have become the computerized,mechanized life. We need to see the human factor come back