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you know where to start
you're here again.
i fear within.
you've got my heart.
you know where to start.
you keep me awake.
right now my mind's in a terrible state.
i long for you.
do you long for me?
do you think we'll ever be?
i hope we will.
you're everything i want right now.
check my mind,
check my heart.
be careful and don't let them fall apart.
you know where to start.
break me now.
i'll be what you want.
bend me now.
i'll be what you need.
kiss me now.
i'll be yours for eternity.
love me now.
watch my face glow.
tell me now,
am i yours and are you mine?
you know where to start.
you've got the key to my heart.
Questions!
Another element that I've recently fallen in love with--it seems like the questions aren't even meant to be answered. That's nice. It's a normal rhyme scheme, and that's the only critique that I have. Things can rhyme so many different ways. It's nice to try different ones. Of course I haven't rhymed in forever so my ideas may be old and outdated. BUT LOOK! I critiqued everything!